On a dark gloomy night. A little girl was reeling up an old raggedy bucket full of water. Then she heard a noise, she looked around but nothing was there except for the moon. She went back to reeling up the bucket, then another rustling noise again, she dropped the bucket in the well and had a closer look around then turned around to the well then a light appeared she quickly.
Redraft-On a dark gloomy night. A little girl was reeling up a old raggedy bucket full of water. Then she heard a noise, she turned to the noise nothing was there except for the moon. She went back to reeling the old bucket, then there was another noise but this time she was that shocked that she let go of the bucket “Splash” The bucket slammed onto the water.
There was no light she looked around the moon was gone.