40 minute persuasive writing

Topic- The South Island is better than the North Island.

Planning:
Presentable- interesting
roads- pot holes,
schools - Hornby
landscape
Earthquakes

Writing:
In this persuasive writing I will argue towards both sides, The North Island is equal with The South Island. The reasons being, The North Island are experiencing major Earthquake problems, more than what South Island. The South Island on the other hand has bad roads and damaged buildings, some are which from earthquake damage, which isn't all that attractive or welcoming to travellers from other places, North Island takes the lead with their amazing sky towers which give off a brilliant view, apart from the certain places in the South Island that are around which are worth seeing if you look hard enough.The last and most important reason I will discuss is Christchurch  having the best school in New Zealand, Hornby High School which I am proud to attend.

North Island is encountering a major impact of earthquakes the past year, which they are increasing rapidly due to the fault line travelling under New Zealand. Though South Island gets the most damage from earthquakes,

South Island are fairly known for their bad roads which doesn't give them a good look. The pot holes around New Zealand are chaotic,

In addition to that point, The South Island has the best school in New Zealand, Hornby High School. South Island is lucky to have such a great school

In conclusion, North Island and South Island are no better than each other, they both have their own  specialities and their own troubles which doesn't put any of them higher than the other. Earthquakes happening in North Island though their amazing tall sky scrapers takes your thought off the disasters. South Island isn't any better with their bad dangerous roads and damaged buildings which don't attract much travellers apart from the demolished cathedral in Christchurch and the Worlds Fastest Indian in Invercargill.